kinda dull
Why do you even try for a semblance of a story when [the story] is going to be that bad? Why not call your show 'Intruder beat down' and just start with the fight scene. Either make a story that is DECENT or toss it and only show the visuals. I was going to say something about insulting intelligence but this is posted for a bunch of children to see.
@_o;;
Good concept
Best part of this is how you changed Akane's voice, that makes me die laughing. I suggest that you change the button's alpha to 0 instead of a blank keyframe when you want to "open the umbrella" button to blink so it doesn't disappear. That part is really annoying when you are unable to click on it altogether. Also, for your pictures, why don't you just trace bitmap and then put your own lines overtop?
??? I'm sorry. I suck at action scripting and I still have alot to learn and you're just going way over my head. Thank you for your review tough! I plan on getting alot better. I hope you make a user account before I forget to mention it as well.
Procrastina..
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Joined on 3/9/03
( Intruder Alert ) 
Ranma½ Interactive Dojo 5